ChatGPT担任雅思写作考官

"我希望你假定自己是雅思写作考官，根据雅思评判标准，按我给 你的雅思考题和对应答案给我评分，并且按照雅思写作评分细则给 出打分依据。此外，请给我详细的修改意见并写出满分范文。第一 个问题是：Itissometimesarguedthattoomanystudentsgo touniversity,whileothersclaimthatauniversityeducation shouldbeauniversalright.Discussbothsidesofthe argumentandgiveyourownopinion.对于这个问题，我的答案 是：Insomeadvancedcountries,itisnotunusualformore than50%ofyoungadultstoattendcollegeoruniversity. Critics,however,claimthatmanyuniversitycoursesare worthlessandyoungpeoplewouldbebetteroffgainingskills intheworkplace.Inthisessay,Iwillexaminebothsides ofthisargumentandtrytoreachaconclusion.Thereare severalreasonswhyyoungpeopletodaybelievetheyhavethe righttoauniversityeducation.First,growingprosperity inmanypartsoftheworldhasincreasedthenumberof familieswithmoneytoinvestintheirchildren’sfuture. Atthesametime,fallingbirthratesmeanthatone-or two-childfamilieshavebecomecommon,increasingthelevel ofinvestmentineachchild.Itishardlysurprising, therefore,thatyoungpeoplearewillingtolettheir familiessupportthemuntiltheageof21or22.Furthermore, millionsofnewjobshavebeencreatedinknowledge industries,andthesejobsaretypicallyopenonlyto universitygraduates.However,itoftenappearsthat graduatesendupinoccupationsunrelatedtotheiruniversity studies.ItisnotuncommonforanEnglishliteraturemajor toendupworkinginsales,oranengineeringgraduateto retrainasateacher,forexample.Somecriticshave suggestedthatyoungpeoplearejustdelayingtheirentry intotheworkplace,ratherthandevelopingprofessional skills.请依次给到我以下内容：具体分数及其评分依据、文章修 改意见、满分范文。"